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Loki Comic Test pages script

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Page 1:

Panel 1: Silhouette of a Loki leaning from an upright pole sticking from the top of a building

Word box: He was beaten, abused, ridiculed by the people.
Word box 2: He is a monster's son.

Pane 2: closes up of left angled totally blank sad looking eyes but rest is silhouetted
Word box: There was only one he trusted. She was…is... his only friend.

Panel 3: the eyes are angry and looking down now

Word box: They drove him off, separated him from her.
Word box 2: but he came back.

Panel 4: Shows the silhouette looking over at a alley from behind the silhouette

Word Box: but not for the people. He couldn't stand the people
Word box 2: he came back for her.

Panel 5: Shows Ami from behind looking into an alley on her left
(Ami) thought bubble: ill get home quicker if I go this way

Page 2

Panel 1: Ami goes into the alley. This is seen from an angled view with a piece of Loki's silhouetted hair seen on the bottom right of the panel

Panel 2: Silhouetted figure behind a close up of Ami

(Man)Dialogue balloon: Hey there Ami

Panel3: upright view of Ami and the figure. Ami now has 2 other figures (the Goons) silhouetted behind her

(Ami) Dialogue balloon: I-I'm sorry I don't know you
(Man)Dialogue balloon: We went to the same school as kids

Panel4: Ami has turned around and is surprised to see the 2 goons and the Man in back is
holding up photos

(Man) Dialogue Balloon: But that's not important. Found these photos in your room

Panel 5: Shows Ami shocked face

(Ami) Dialogue Balloon: How did you-
(Man) Dialogue Balloon: The security around your home is surprisingly lax.

Panel 6: shows photos of Loki and Ami together playing as kids

(Man) Word Box: You associated with the demon spawn, that's against the law you know.
(Man) Word box 2: Your gonna be the leader of the most powerful clan in city soon.

Page 3:

Panel 1: Another photo of Ami and Loki is shown

(Man) Word box: Just imagine the scandal it would cause if news of this got out.
(Man)  Word box 2: The whole family would be shamed for years.

Panel 2:  Ami is looking down helplessly

(Ami)Dialogue Balloon: N-no please...don't. I- I'll do whatever you want, just don't show those pictures…
(Man) Dialogue Balloon (off panel): That's what I was hoping for.
Panel 3: Silhouette of the Man grinning evilly
(Man) Dialogue balloon: First, show us what you're hiding under the kimono

Panel 4:  Shows Ami tearfully beginning to open her kimono for the Man and Goons

(Man) Dialogue balloon (off panel): Good girl. Now, get on your knees

Panel 5: Shows the same picture as page 1 panel one except Loki is no longer in the shot. Only his tail coming from the bottom is visible

(Man) Dialogue balloon (off panel): Take em off
Panel 6: Loki is in the shadow s behind one of the men
(Man)Dialogue balloon: Now start sucking

Page 4

Panel1: the 1st Goon is pulled into the shadows

AUUGGH in Letters is over the page

Panel 2: Man is now pulling up his pants in frenzy yelling

(Man) Dialogue balloon: WHAT THE F*** WAS THAT!

Panel 3:   Blood splashes over the Man

(Man) Dialogue balloon: oh...oh gods…

Panel 4: shows Loki mostly covered in shadow and blood

(Loki) Dialogue balloon: there's no gods here little man.
(Loki) Dialogue balloon 2: only me.

Panel 5: Loki attacks the Man tearing through him

(Man) Dialogue balloon: NO NO NO AUGHH!!!!

Panel 6:  Loki in foreground. His back facing Ami behind as he looks at the carnage

Panel 7: Loki falls over near Ami

Panel 8:  Silhouette of Ami kneeling in front of Loki

(Ami) Dialogue balloon: Loki. You've come back.
Test script for a reboot im doing on the Loki the Fox boy Comic.

It IS partially influenced by Naruto, but also other comics like Spawn and Batman. The comic will use some Naruto archetypes but other than that its going to be VERY VERY different from it. Its going to be a sorta superhero comic. I will work on this alongside my Correr(still scripting) and The Charge (brainstorming) comics

Loki (c) ME!!
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